For this essay, we took two genres of writing (narrative and expository essay) and turned them into one cohesive paper. We chose a topic and wrote about it while writing a narrative for the first half and describing the issue in the second half while taking a neutral stance on the matter. Revisions for this essay mostly came in the 2nd half of the essay. I ended up making the expository half of the essay pretty vague for the most part, mainly with the usage of pronouns like these or this, which made parts of the essay hard to understand. I had to tweak those parts of the essay to make it sound clearer to the reader.



My revised essay is in its own sub-menu for your viewing.